I would like to say this as a forward, I'm not editing these post before I post them here because Nanowrimo is about getting the words on the page, and shutting down your inner editor. Today was a great day today I wrote 2,4 something words today for a total of 7,030!!!!!! I believe this book me around two -three hours to do. Today I wrote some more of chapter two, and I started chapter 3 the first sentence anyway. I'm going to share two paragraphs about Phoebe one of my MC's meeting the new neighbor.
“So what sort of things are you all into” Rhi asked as she guided the girls to the play room, becasue she was an only child and her mother was a baker and her father was a journalist, she had a lot of different things that she was interested in even at the age of four. The funny thing was that Phoebe really hadn’t really had anyone but her family ask her what she was interested in, and she loved this because had everything in her head and what she was going to say. “ I really like the typical girl stuff like dolls, barbies, playing house, and I’m really interested in reading” Phoebe said this and hoped that this was the answer that Rhiannon was looking for. “ I’m kind of the tom boy in the bunch, not into the super girly things but I like hot wheels, super heroes, and I take dance lessons it’s the most girly thing that I do” Lizzie wasn’t into the super girly things but she had respect for her sisters that were. “ I’m into the same things as Phoebe dolls, barbies, playing house, and we’re both really into reading what about you Rhi?” “ I really like the girly things as well playing dress up, playing house, dolls, barbies, and I really like reading as well” it was kind of crazy how much two of the three girls that were here liked the same things that she liked. The funny thing was that she hoped that this would happen, she hoped that the girls that lived next door would like her and that they would come over and introduce themselves to her.
For Lizzie this wouldn’t work out she already could tell that Rhi wasn’t going to be a friend for her, becasue her sisters were girly enough for her and she didn’t need another person that was really girly like them. “ What’s your favorite book Phoebe and Lauren,” Rhi had been reading from the time that she was three she mostly taught herself, but she did have some help with the big words. “ I really like the Madeline books and the Eloise books” Phoebe stated, and this really worked out becasue she could see the Madeline books around the room it was perfect. “ I really like Amelia Bedelia and Frog and Toad” Ren also really liked the new neighbor not as much as Phoebe probably did, but she really liked that they had a friend that was into reading just like she and Phoebe and that they could talk about books . “ I really loved all four of those books, and I would love to talk about those books with you both at some point.” It was like Lizzie was not in the room right now, and she was okay with that because she was not one that was very much into reading books but she liked that her sisters, well that her sisters had a friend honestly. After a about another hour of playing and talking the girls had to go home, the older kids were coming home from school and at this point Lucy liked being there when they got home from school.
“So what sort of things are you all into” Rhi asked as she guided the girls to the play room, becasue she was an only child and her mother was a baker and her father was a journalist, she had a lot of different things that she was interested in even at the age of four. The funny thing was that Phoebe really hadn’t really had anyone but her family ask her what she was interested in, and she loved this because had everything in her head and what she was going to say. “ I really like the typical girl stuff like dolls, barbies, playing house, and I’m really interested in reading” Phoebe said this and hoped that this was the answer that Rhiannon was looking for. “ I’m kind of the tom boy in the bunch, not into the super girly things but I like hot wheels, super heroes, and I take dance lessons it’s the most girly thing that I do” Lizzie wasn’t into the super girly things but she had respect for her sisters that were. “ I’m into the same things as Phoebe dolls, barbies, playing house, and we’re both really into reading what about you Rhi?” “ I really like the girly things as well playing dress up, playing house, dolls, barbies, and I really like reading as well” it was kind of crazy how much two of the three girls that were here liked the same things that she liked. The funny thing was that she hoped that this would happen, she hoped that the girls that lived next door would like her and that they would come over and introduce themselves to her.
For Lizzie this wouldn’t work out she already could tell that Rhi wasn’t going to be a friend for her, becasue her sisters were girly enough for her and she didn’t need another person that was really girly like them. “ What’s your favorite book Phoebe and Lauren,” Rhi had been reading from the time that she was three she mostly taught herself, but she did have some help with the big words. “ I really like the Madeline books and the Eloise books” Phoebe stated, and this really worked out becasue she could see the Madeline books around the room it was perfect. “ I really like Amelia Bedelia and Frog and Toad” Ren also really liked the new neighbor not as much as Phoebe probably did, but she really liked that they had a friend that was into reading just like she and Phoebe and that they could talk about books . “ I really loved all four of those books, and I would love to talk about those books with you both at some point.” It was like Lizzie was not in the room right now, and she was okay with that because she was not one that was very much into reading books but she liked that her sisters, well that her sisters had a friend honestly. After a about another hour of playing and talking the girls had to go home, the older kids were coming home from school and at this point Lucy liked being there when they got home from school.
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